The given six pie charts reveal the proportion of water used in North America , South America , Europe , Africa , Central Asia , Southeast Asia for three different purposes.
Overall , it can be seen from the graph that All the nations used the maximum water for Agricultiral sites . Whereas, Central Asia and Southeast asia used the equal per cent am of water for domestic purpose .
To begin with , 53% of water used for Industrial use in europe . By comparison , the north American used 48% of water for this purpose, other remaining nations South America, Africa , Central asia and Southeast asia were using water 10% , 9% , 5% , and 12% respectively for this work. Moreover, the least water used by all the countries in domestic use nearly about less than 20 % .
Moving further , Africa had the highest percentage of water in agricultural use . It used approximately a quarter of water . Similarly , central asia and southeast Asia also had the maximum percentage about 88% and 81 considerably in agricultural use . Other three nations North america , South America , and europe used the water in agricultural use at about 13% , 71% , and 15 % .
- The two pie charts below show changes in world population by region between 1900 and 2000 Summarise the information by choosing and reporting the key features and make any relevant comparisons 72
- The pie charts below show the coffee production coffee consumption and the profit distribution around the world Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use 10
- the line graph below shows the oil production and consumption in china between 1982 and 2006 67
- The graph below shows the percentage of urban suburban and rural households in England that had Internet access between 1999 and 2004 59
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, similarly, so, whereas, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 948.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12432432432 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73807550337 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518918918919 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 298.8 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.4918175055 43.030603864 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 5.23603664747 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 1.69756097561 1944% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307230212293 0.215688989381 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155763523578 0.103423049105 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425615320918 0.0843802449381 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211147527524 0.15604864568 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0181406119011 0.0819641961636 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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