Do you agree or disagree with following statement? if people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying. use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In this competitIve job markets everyone try to land job which be appropriate with their situations and their goals. Many people think taking a job that is secure is more important than wait for a job that would be satisfying. On other hand, others prefer to be patient till find a better job that is favorable. I personally hold the first view. In the following paragraph, I will delve into most conspicuous reasons and examples justifying my point of view.
First, due to the complexity of modern era, finding a job is very hard. the population has increased dramatically over the last decades, artificial intelligence have occupied most positions and many jobs which used to be , nowadays are disappeared; therefore positions of jobs that are available will be desired by many candidates. So if we could find a secure job we should definitely accept it, because we might be unable to find our favorite or dream work. For example, in many countries that are involved with a lot of economic crisis, many people don't even have the chance of landing a simple job such as waiter or salesperson. Thus, I believe that it's better idea to get this job and then also pursue our dreams as well.
Second, satisfying with a job is mostly imagination of our mind. This satisfaction sometimes will be so unsustainable. If you ask a vast majority of people, who achieved their dream work, whether they satisfied with their work now, I bet most of them will tell no! and also if you ask people who have secure job this question, they will say yes!! Because secure jobs don't have a lot of pressure and stress. People may at first be disappointed, but eventually they will be so glad. For example, my father was a bank employer, he had much time to spend with his family and he was relaxed and calm without worry about his future career. Although he wanted to be a businessman, he is really happy that he didn't wait for it. Since he couldn't bear that much stress as a business man specially during several recession that our country had faced.
In conclusion, I highly recommend that people should get a secure job right away, due to being hard to find a job and the benefits of secure job that will offer to people who choose it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, really, second, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1822.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 395.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61265822785 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61217081831 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546835443038 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.9536874548 48.9658058833 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.222222222 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9444444444 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352857074079 0.236089414692 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108683382607 0.076458572812 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0920239391749 0.0737576698707 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24009144253 0.150856017488 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484675242869 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.