Healthcare and education should be provided free by the government for anyone who needs it. How much do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
Write at least 250 words.
It is said that the government should pay for its residents on healthcare and education so that everyone can be taken care and taught. This essay can show that I'm neutral toward this statement and it will provide some reasons to support my opinions.
First of all, everyone has the right to access to healthcare service and education. It means that personal background doesn't matter in this context as the right have been written in any country's rules and Constitutions. So as there are some particular groups of people who can't afford the fee due to many reasons, the government should definitely help the,. It's the government's responsibility to keep its residents healthy and literal.
Secondly, everyone of working age pay taxes everyday and taxes are used for many kinds of public services. Nowadays, healthcare and education have become parts of services since people have to pay many to use them. The fee of services should be all included in the taxes and kept at a proper level.
However, the "healthcare and education" taxes have just been applied in developed countries. One the one hand, developing countries can't afford free services for everyone simply because it's impossible. The society isn't rich, people aren't well paid, the government still has big international debts which needed to be paid, etc. Even in the USA, where children can go to public schools freely, many teachers are unpaid, their lifves are difficult because of the shortage of income; then how will developing countries deal with more problems while they are still struggling with finance issues?
In conclusion, free healthcare and education should be applied in suitable communities with proper level of taxes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, well, while, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18345323741 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76969307521 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579136690647 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8806940023 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.928571429 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210944503961 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707781504782 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440099802476 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125536372824 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423630115511 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.