Some people believe the purpose of education is to prepare people to be useful members of society, others say that the purpose of education is to achieve personal ambitions. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
People have differing views with regard to the question of the role and function of education. While there are some arguments that education is supposed to fulfill individual aspirations, I am inclined towards the idea that it leads to people’s contribution to society.
There are some several reasons why education is considered to be essential to personal goals. Firstly, people heretofore can achieve recognition and respect by being well-educated. For example, many contestants in national academic competitions become renowned for their comprehensive knowledge. Secondly, education would offer people access to better job opportunities, thereby leading to higher salaries for their livings. To illustrate, young people who continue their studies beyond school level would get academic qualifications related to their areas of learning that are required for several professions.
Despite arguments above, I support the view that the purpose of education is to benefit society in various ways. First of all, people who receive decent education are likely to become essential for the working labour with skills and knowledge acquired. For example, it is impossible to become a doctor, teacher or lawyer without having academic qualifications. Morever, education raise public awareness in many life aspects to help the commnunity. Take driving course as an example, it is vitually important to educate people properly before they start to drive, which would certainly reduce road accidents.
In conclusion, although personal ambitions could be achieved by schooling, it seems to me that the sole aim of education is to form a well-prepared generation to develop our society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, first of all, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65217391304 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02399699017 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640316205534 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5913692084 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.0 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285072250366 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0978455147041 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596531507652 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165614999883 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.012486299031 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.49 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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