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Tpo 31. intewgrated
This set of the material in the both reading and lecture is about a fossild skeleton of a specific dinosaur, which was found in volcanic ash, called Sinosauropteryx. The reading provides thre pieces of evidence indicating that patterns of fossils such as fine lines could not represent that the dinosaur had feather. The lecturer, nonetheless, refutes the author's explanations by offering three counterclaims.
First, the passage posits that after dying, the animal's skin might have decomposed into fibers. Therefore, such patterns could be an indication of skin fibers. The lecturer, in contrast...
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Sentence: This set of the material in the both reading and lecture is about a fossild skeleton of a specific dinosaur, which was found in volcanic ash, called Sinosauropteryx.
Error: fossild Suggestion: fossil
Sentence: The reading provides thre pieces of evidence indicating that patterns of fossils such as fine lines could not represent that the dinosaur had feather.
Error: thre Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: The lecturer, in contrast, takes this view that none of fossiles discovered at the same area, had such fine lined on fossils.
Error: fossiles Suggestion: No alternate word
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Score: 27 in 30
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 3 2
No. of Sentences: 15 12
No. of Words: 291 250
No. of Characters: 1521 1200
No. of Different Words: 166 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.13 4.2
Average Word Length: 5.227 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.668 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 107 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 90 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 68 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 34 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.4 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.651 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.8 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.312 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.544 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.106 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4