Every day, animals are becoming extinct throughout the world. What do you think the causes of this are? What solutions can you suggest?
The danger of animals’ extinction becomes one of the most serious concerns all over the world in the present day. This issue will be discussed in this essay along with some possible solutions that may be implemented to tackle the problem.
To begin with, several explanations are worth mentioning about this issue. One of the major causes is the rapid increase in illegal hunting and poaching. It is widely believed that productions such as medicine, food, … made by the parts of the animals are healthy and valuable. Moreover, the bone and fur of them have considered luxury ornaments and the clearest evidence proving the wealth of the owners. Because of those demands, hunters and poachers have a strong motive for the cruel crime that is about hunting or even killing animals, especially wild rare animals. As a result, the quantity of wild animals is becoming decreased at an alarming rate. Not to mention that, the negative changes of the environment leading to the large numbers of disasters such as forest fire, global warming, … exert a deleterious impact on animals’ survival. Losing their habitats as well as the sources of food means that the animals could not afford to face harsh difficulties nature may bring out. Frequently, the struggle for existence between members of the same species and the different species in the wild world become increasingly critical and extinction comes.
The rising issue extremely needs the attention of society to be solved as soon as possible. First and foremost, the illegal hunting prohibition laws should be passed by the governments and obliged by the citizens of every country in the world. Besides, taking the best efforts to prevent the bad influence of the environment on wildlife is essential to conserve the nature for animals to live peacefully. Finally, preserving and multiplication endangered species are also the best way to protect biodiversity. National parks or nature reserve should be built and extended so that the conserving activities are organized perfectly because they play a significant role in maintaining our diverse ecosystem.
In conclusion, rare animals’ extinction is one of the hottest problems that just can be eliminated by valuable strategies which are applied effectively and solidarity of all the people on global scale for the future where human live happily with the wildlife.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 954, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'difficulties'' or 'difficulty's'?
Suggestion: difficulties'; difficulty's
... animals could not afford to face harsh difficulties nature may bring out. Frequently, the s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, if, may, moreover, so, well, as for, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2003.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 384.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21614583333 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78041961504 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596354166667 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 633.6 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7038151434 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.823529412 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5882352941 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64705882353 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147891523097 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424101984312 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043487707495 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0921719934912 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517189546666 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 78.4519038076 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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