Travelling in group with a tour guide is the best way to travel.
Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Nowadays, people have their own preferences for how they travel. Some people believe hiring a tourist guide is a better option, while some refute this claim. I agree with the former claim to travel with a tourist guide due to several reasons. This essay will explain why is it beneficial to have a tourist guide while travelling with supporting points for it.
Firstly, the primary reason for anyone to go on a trip, apart from relaxation is to explore new places and discover new things. For a visitor, who is visiting a place for the first time, it would be a difficult task to find new places and understand the history of it. Secondly, while visiting a new place it is very important to understand the map of the destination and also familiarize with how to commute within that area. Who would know it better than a person who actually lives in that area? So, it's a better way to hire a tourist so that the visitors don't get lost in the unfamiliar land.
On the other hand, it is often seen that the tourist guides do charge hefty money looking at the size of a group. Paying a huge amount for what is to be a 1-day trip is quite unreasonable. Hence, instead of paying huge to the tourist guide, people do opt to discover places on their own which saves them quite a lot of money.
Concluding, the best way to travel is by appointing a tourist throughout the tour, but only if the group of people travelling feel it worth to pay a huge amount of money to really understand the places they're visiting.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, while, apart from, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1241.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48014440433 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44918112554 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537906137184 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6968879202 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4615384615 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246896894221 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0890722294511 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105207442037 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154787637064 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107600516354 0.056905535591 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.