You have had a bank account for a few years. Recently you received a letter from the Bank stating that your account is $240 overdrawn and that you will be charged $70 which will be taken directly from your account. You know that this information is incorrect.
Write a letter to the bank. Explain what has happened and say what you
would like them to do about it.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in response to the letter from your bank which stated that my account had been overdrawn for $240, and I would be fined for $70 from my savings.I have had a prime account in National Australian Bank for 14 years at Sydney branch, and it has always been a pleasure to be your client.
A few days ago, I had been to an ATM for $240 withdrawal. Due to some mis-functioning of the machine, my account was debited twice; however, I received money only once. The bank had been informed instantly, and I was assured to have the matter looked into the matter urgently.
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