The effect of the globalisation, which has always been debatable, has now become even more controversial. The world in which we resides is enormous but due the new trend of globalisation it becoming a smaller place. There are some people who think that the globalisation is a negative development as it will vanish the culture. I am not agree with the statement that globalisation vanish the culture. In this essay, I am going to shed light on my point of view regarding globalisation and impact on the culture.
On the one hand, there are numerous benefits of globalisation for all people. Firstly, the globalisation stronger the bond between the people of different culture, religion and race. For example, the people get opportunity to explore another countries culture as well as religion, so they can become multicultural. Secondly, the globalisation give chance to dwellers to explore the tourist places in the whole world.
Along with this, the globalisation give economical and financial benefits to the people as it will enhance the economy of the host country. Furthermore, because of globalisation one can able to attend and enjoy the events held in any part of the world that will also enhance economy of that particular country. In addition, the globalisation enhance the professional and business relationships between the countries.
In conclusion, we can analyse from the above writing that globalisation is not effect negatively on the culture as it will make the people multicultural by giving them opportunity to explore the religion, culture and living pattern of other countries. Further, it is expected that the government and individual try their best to further improve the situations in the future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'reside'
Suggestion: reside
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
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Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 5.75862068966 330% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1207.87684729 121% => OK
No of words: 277.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25631768953 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16252493205 2.71678728327 116% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530685920578 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 470.7 379.143842365 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 7.0 1.56157635468 448% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7759349663 50.4703680194 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 104.977214359 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 7.25397266985 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16177533037 0.242375264174 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574050573394 0.0925447433944 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469475727298 0.071462118173 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0971462862249 0.151781067708 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220563529003 0.0609392437508 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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