Money plays an important role in every person's life. Nowadays, there are diametrically opposite people sharing their opinion about either spending or saving money. Majority of the people think about enjoying their life is the best way to live and a very few of them saves money for the future. Constructing a bright future depends upon balancing both savings and expenditure. People are quite dogmatic about their opinion whenever there is an argument regarding accumulating or disseminating money.
From a profligate point of view, spending recklessly has been the norm of the lifestyle. They spend extravagantly with least botheration about gaining wealth. They believe in living the moments of life. Their underlying principles are based upon acquiring luxuries in whatever situation they are subjected to live in. For example, people never mind changing their outdated electronic gadgets regardless of the price. Exhibiting a ravishing expensive vehicle as a social dignity; throwing flamboyant parties; paying off installments for their overboard lavish expenses and many unnecessary show offs forms an integral part of their financial outlay.
A person showing frugal behavior towards money is always appreciated for their wiser way to handle situations. They redefine life based upon the solid principles of savings and investments. Though people are considered to be a miser, they have the capacity to rotate the wealth gained. Sometimes they invest wisely and yield a lucrative money at exponential rates. They always feel secured with the disbursement of money in a very diligent manner. However, they seem to restrain themselves from the entertainment surrounding them. Their participation in many aspects of pompous celebrations are restricted to the pre-planned financial layout.
In my opinion, savings and expenditures go hand in hand. With proper investments around, a person can spend the leftover for a better lifestyle. In fact, we live in a world where entertainment sees no bound. It is indeed limitless. However, spending a part of the earnings towards a prodigal lifestyle is not innocuous as people portray. Perhaps, a concrete idea and a foreplan for saving money is mandatory for people so that the feeling of insecurity is no longer a threat to their life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 40, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
Money plays an important role in every persons life. Nowadays, there are diametrically...
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Line 2, column 114, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the least'.
Suggestion: with the least
...the lifestyle. They spend extravagantly with least botheration about gaining wealth. They ...
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Line 3, column 325, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'lucrative money'.
Suggestion: lucrative money
... Sometimes they invest wisely and yield a lucrative money at exponential rates. They always feel ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y is no longer a threat to their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, so, for example, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1932.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41176470588 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94338719104 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2693837039 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.875 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.625 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243581318016 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682272306797 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677398884236 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158554763174 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100633522092 0.056905535591 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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