Stress is now a major problem in many countries around the world. What are some of the factors in modern society that cause this stress, and how can we reduce it?
In the world of today, due to advancement in all industries human faced stress in any nook and cranny of the world. In this essay, I shall discuss some reasons why this has occurred and suggest some ways forward.
To embark on, there are several reasons of local community throughout people face stress, First and foremost, technology revolution is pivotal issue for this because of people use every technical equipment in their life that is why, they do not have any type of relaxation, even in their holiday they connected with their work life. In addition to this, competition among people is crucial for producing stress. People have work hard to get sufficient income to survive their family in this costly world. For this reason, they receive high grade in their education life because, if they not obtain enough percentage, large company denied their approval. Consequently, children and young people both faced this tremendous situation in their routine life.
Tacking such problems will not be easy, but there are several measures that can be taken. To begin with people and government implement limit to use internet related machinery in their workplaces as well as, private companies owner and manager also give freedom to their employees to leave every task in office and chill with their family. Moreover, government invite some multinational organizations in their nation to increase opportunity for latest employee. For this reason, competition should maintain and student not get high score in their academic.
By way of conclusion, there are many factor around us today which lead to stress. But, if people set regulation on internet uses and maintain competition among people, almost high amount of stress will relief to people's life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 216, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'companies'' or 'company's'?
Suggestion: companies'; company's
...in their workplaces as well as, private companies owner and manager also give freedom to ...
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Line 4, column 38, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'factors'?
Suggestion: factors
.... By way of conclusion, there are many factor around us today which lead to stress. B...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, moreover, so, well, in addition, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1472.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18309859155 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55540665142 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612676056338 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.9171943296 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.230769231 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154501036396 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710965792367 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556747736459 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11707294213 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554620455679 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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