In some country, owning a house rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why this may be the case?
Do you think this is a negative or positive situation.?
Nowadays, people reckon that an adult person should have a home for on their own and that is a pivotal thing in their life than reside in an accommodation. This thing may be true. There are some factors to people think which have a considerable effect in their thoughts which can cause that this is a positive opinion.
From my perspective, the advantages of possessing an apartment for people are rather significant. Firstly, in Asian culture nations, One of the decisive element of getting married of a man is have a home for theirselves to start up a home .if they have not, it is hard to persuade parent’s their wife-future to accept their marriage ,but some people argue that it is not necessary house , it may be true for some others. However, I still believe that owning a flat for a man is easier for them to settle in a new life. Secondly, the day-by-day expenses of living in the big cities as well as rural areas is ridiculously expensive .If an individual get the expenses of paying money to landlord, even it can be a half of their salary. A lack of money can lead to enormous problems to sustain in their life. For instance, because of food in the end of months or expense for electricity, they can get into debt as a result.
Nonetheless, there are also the benefits for hiring an accommodation. The renter can move in to anywhere they desire to live or have a trip business in foreign suddenly for a year or more. They will be free to go aboard and work without any ties or hesitation.
In sump up, admittedly, possessing an apartment for the demand of society is the key for dealing with some major problems. Having said that, This is no deniable that living in the accommodation can give freedom for them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'accommodation'.
Suggestion: accommodation
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Suggestion:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
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Suggestion:
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...ome for theirselves to start up a home .if they have not, it is hard to persuad...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'accommodation'.
Suggestion: accommodation
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...dealing with some major problems. Having said that, This is no deniable that livi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, still, well, for instance, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52715654952 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70081908111 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552715654952 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.0136041569 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.214285714 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3571428571 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216778639167 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812409234992 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601086939451 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134062844016 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618477490948 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.29 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.