The charts below give information about weather in two Brazilian cities.
The diagram below reveals data about rainfall and temperature in Brasilia and Recife. Overall, it is apparent that Recife much more warmer than Brasilia.
In Brasilia the hottest season is in the end of the summer and in the beginning of autumn. The average temperature in the summer is around 35°C and approximately 2-3 days are wet in a month. However, the opposite trend is determined in Recife. The summer season there is the wettest one during the whole year with about 250 mm per month.
The temperature in Brasilia has more fluctuations than Recife. Compared to Brasilia, where the temperature varies from 0°C to 37°C Recife has more stable temperature from 15°C to 38°C.
Moreover, by average sunshine hours in Recife there is only 3 hours, even though in Brasilia there are 5 hours more. In addition to that, there is considerable difference in days with thunder, if in Brasilia the maximum number of days is 16, in Recife, however, there are only three.
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Recife much more warmer than Brasilia.
Recife is much warmer than Brasilia.
The temperature in Brasilia has more fluctuations than Recife
The temperature in Brasilia has more fluctuations than that in Recife
there is considerable difference
there is a considerable difference
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