Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in schools
Success is an important part of our lives. It is sum of small efforts and day in day out. In order to be a successful person in the future, we should find what is that aspect of success and what is best to be an effective person in a future job. Some people agree that the ability to relate well to people is essential to be a successful worker in a job since it will help you to communicate and work hard. Others would disagree. Personally, I believe that studying hard in school is necessary for success in a future job for two imperative reasons.
To begin with, through studying hard in school,...
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It is sum of small efforts
It is a sum of small efforts
Sentence: In order for us to work in a good manner and in an effecient one, we should have all the knowledge about our job.
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Sentence: Take myself as an example, five years ago, when I graduated from pharmacy school, I worked as a phrmacist at the hospital.
Error: phrmacist Suggestion: pharmacist
Sentence: By the way of conclusion, based on the arguments explored above, I firmly concur that success in a future job is to study hard which has many advatages and it is worthwhile.
Error: advatages Suggestion: advantages
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