More and more people now own cars What are the problems associated with an increase in the usage of private cars How can these problems be solved

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More and more people now own cars. What are the problems associated with an increase in the usage of private cars? How can these problems be solved?

Nowhere in history has the issue been more visible than the mass expansion in the number of private cars, which could brings a lot of negative impacts. From my perspective, throughout analysis, the consequences for this mounting predicament and the resolution to alleviate it will be illustrated in my following essay.
There is no denying that traffic problems in many crowded cities are culminated from the increase in the usage of private cars. As more people commute by their own cars in peaktimes, traffic congestion takes place everyday, which not only causes many disavantages in people’daily life, but also the surge of car accidents. Apart from this, the environment is also effect negatively. Since most cars use fossil fuels, the air in urban areas becames more polluted day by day, which affects badly to our health.Also, this will bring about a profound impact on the shortage of fossil fuels, which has been concerned about in years.
Regarding potential solutions, improving public transport is better. One of the main reason why people prefer traveling by cars is public transportation’s infracture is not confortable enough. Therefore, when improve the public transportation’s quality and apply more routes, people would be tend to traveling by cars less and using city buses, jams and metro. Another possible solution, which has been succeed in many countries such as Germany and Singapore, is inposing high taxes on cars. As soon as price of cars becomes higher, as a result,less people could afford private cars.
In conclusion, it seems that the rise in traffic issues and environmental problems are the main consequences associated to the increment in private vehicles. Potential solutions would involve improvement in public tranportation and also, the high taxes imposition of cars.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 118, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the number of private cars, which could brings a lot of negative impacts. From m...
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Line 1, column 120, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'bring'
Suggestion: bring
...he number of private cars, which could brings a lot of negative impacts. From my pers...
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Line 2, column 214, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...aktimes, traffic congestion takes place everyday, which not only causes many disavantage...
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Line 2, column 508, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Also
... day, which affects badly to our health.Also, this will bring about a profound impac...
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Line 3, column 332, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tend to traveling by cars less and using city buses, jams and metro. Another poss...
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Line 3, column 404, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'succeeded'.
Suggestion: succeeded
...other possible solution, which has been succeed in many countries such as Germany and S...
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Line 3, column 545, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , less
...rice of cars becomes higher, as a result,less people could afford private cars. In ...
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Line 3, column 546, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun people is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ice of cars becomes higher, as a result,less people could afford private cars. In ...
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Line 4, column 248, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'taxes'' or 'tax's', 'taxis's'?
Suggestion: taxes'; tax's; taxis's
...public tranportation and also, the high taxes imposition of cars.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, therefore, apart from, in conclusion, such as, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1531.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33449477352 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99768634454 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599303135889 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.0236025754 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.769230769 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242202178899 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773684085211 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671735902202 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127305061833 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546571356136 0.056905535591 96% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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