University education should provide the theory and practical knowledge for the students. Working in a company as part of study will provide more knowledge. But it is argued that payment is expected during this period. Here knowledge outweigh the payment. In this essay we will discuss about these two.
First, graduates expect a job after the study. Companies expect the trained employees for the jobs. So some colleges are mandate the work experience as part of the curriculum. One of the main goals of apprenticeship is to get more practical experience. Trained students can easily get inducted into the companies. Companies often review the apprentices and provide the employment for them after completing the studies. It is beneficial to the companies and students as well. Companies need to hire the new employees every year. Identifying the skilled employees and recruit them is a very tiresome process for the companies. Through the apprenticeship companies have the time to analyze them by giving the work.
On the other hand, there is no payment when they are working in a company as apprentices. It is a limited period. Students need to work without money. Some people may think it cruel and inhumane. But I would think that it is as an investment for my future. As students may recruit for the company or can put this experience in their resume.
Overall,I believe that apprenticeship is more helpful to the students. It improves the job prospects for the students. It is suggested that students should consider this program more seriously.
- In many countries around the world young people decide to leave their parents home once they finish school They start living on their own or sharing a home with friends Is this a positive or a negative development Give reasons for your answer and include 78
- Nowadays as a part of the education process students are working for a company for a short period of time without pay Are there more advantages or disadvantages to this Give your own opinion 56
- Nowadays air travel is cheaper than in the past Is this a positive or a negative development Discuss and give your own opinion 51
- Nowadays young people know less about traditions and culture than in the past What are the reasons for it What can be done to improve this situation 56
- Some people think that politicians have the greatest influence on the world Other people however believe that scientists have the greatest influence Discuss both views and give your opinion 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, well, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1300.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05836575875 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83310703656 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517509727626 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 20.2975951904 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.5848093263 49.4020404114 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 54.1666666667 106.682146367 51% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 10.7083333333 20.7667163134 52% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.0 7.06120827912 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 3.4128256513 410% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352666260445 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0893033282488 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548965381565 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200346381417 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335930442323 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.33 50.2224549098 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.88 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 10.1190380762 59% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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