Water is a vital resource in the world without which life cycle and growth can not be sustained. There are two distinctive views towards the water consumption; firstly, a group who believe they are entitled to use as much water as they want, and a second contrasting group who argue that the government should restrict the wasteful water usage.
Undoubtedly, one of the most essential requirements in the globe is the need of water. science and experience showed that life without water is impossible even by few days. So, the first group pressure their claim to unlimitedly implement water in their lives. Simply because fresh water is their right and no one can restrict them. For instance using for dinking, washing and everything should be done related their request. Meanwhile, clearly water resources in the world is limited and nowadays, the climate change has exacerbated this challenge.
In the next side of the first group, others by to optimal using on existence evidences, population exposing and water resources in thee cosmic is plural, consequently consuming with none strike attention cause future tackle by insoluble issue which is result of human present. For example, unwisely carving underground water which is pure type in wide range applications, lead to derestic the biggest salt lake with unpredicted event for next genre. They confirm fresh water regard government letters.
I believe water is the most necessary material in our lives which is absence of it life is meaningless. But, how to use is prominent and government by detecting some offence for people who exceed of determined using, obtain them as criminal for obeying by others to achieve best result.
Overall, using fresh water is primitive requirement for mankind but, using this basic material should be done with considering to others.
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...uld be done with considering to others.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, if, second, so, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18243243243 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67549651325 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591216216216 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.8915893421 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.571428571 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361177297985 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120842303038 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.081514951418 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20379084441 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634159268465 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.