Using a computer everyday can have more negative than positive effects on your children.
Do you agree or disagree?
computer has big rule in our life and no one can abnegation of direct impact of computer in our growing.
but the main things that's important is how to use this technology and how many times you should spend on it. children are one of the greatest group that like to work on computer. in the following paragraph discussed it is good or not.
Absolutly we know that computer easy our life and can store our times by manage and schedule our jobs, even though using a lot of time computer cause be addict and it should be one of our habits. some stages of life it's not danger that how many times we spent on our PC, but younger should dived their time on that other amusement . young people brains need to grow in all aspect such as emotional, social, physical, logical and etc, so if they spend a lot time on computer it maybe damage many useful aspects.
one of attractive parts of computer is gaming and over parents fear of addicting their children by this. gaming developer has own strategy to absorb new user and sell huge amount of their product, therefore it so main to control children when they work on computer, basically computer has many benefits in life cycle, because we can access stack information in moment time and this data can be useful and some times maybe harmful.
All in all, computer is useful for all range of human and the main things that should be obey is culture of using it and control children by parents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1189.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52091254753 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24324309374 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539923954373 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.8785489841 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.9 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148014467073 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640460827658 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371148325081 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0952220732108 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0187176422128 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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