The news is an important source of knowledge for all of us about the world, especially in this era of technology. Journalists are mainly responsible to bring this news to us but not all of them are true to their responsibilities and ethics. How much can we trust the journalists?
Articles in paper media or digital medium has become an vital source to keep abreast with changing trends around the world. Some people have an opinion that not all reporters present the news that reflect the situation at ground level. This essay will discuss the effect of commercialization of news and new options for honest and aspiring journalists.
To begin with , there is ample evidence that majority of article reported these days have no credibility. The central reason for this, only few corporations trying to control the media and presenting only selective information. This majorly effects journalism on a broader perspective as journalists are resorted to write or speak on topics which can sell out their magazines, papers or result in high TRP’s. To illustrate this, a significant broadcast channel in the USA has discarded potential news due to their potential to attract higher TRP’s as admitted by a former editor-in chief. Therefore it is conclusively clear that the rules of disclosing the data to public has changed rapidly consequently loosing the integrity of the profession.
Although there is a case for reliability of information presented to us, there is no shortage of independent journalists writing articles and publishing across different blogs. Technology advancements have opened opportunities and created an alternative medium to mainstream media. Responsible journalists who vow to keep their work ethics intact have an audience and readers that could be detrimental. For example, a simple article on farmers suicide in India by a journalist student has created chaos in parliament forcing the government to table a bill in the support of farmers. Thus it is possible to say that honest reporters exist and are crucial in bringing awareness to public.
To sum up, although there is a decrease in trustworthiness due to commercialization of news reported , there is no dearth of newsman nor the sources to be published.
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| 2020-12-12 | ghostwriter | 89 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'losing the'?
Suggestion: losing the
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'farmers'' or 'farmer's'?
Suggestion: farmers'; farmer's
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Suggestion: Thus,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, so, therefore, thus, for example, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1651.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30868167203 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11779510663 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617363344051 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.026321939 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.928571429 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2142857143 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244041827995 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682169819305 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414824829181 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127943415107 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430344473666 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.11 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.