Have you been given a lot of choices and found it hard to choose one? Have you never had choices and had people make your choice? Do you think nowadays we have too many choices? Well, whatever your answer is, I'm here to persuade you about how people are spoilt for choices these days. Follow along with me while I try to convince you.
Firstly, when you walk into a shopping centre you see a lot of people don't you? I bet you don't know the real reason they're there. The real reason people are at shopping malls strolling off to different shops and cafés is because they have too many choices! There's Coles, there's Woolworths, there's Costco. Which one do they shop at though? All of them. At least once in our lives I'm sure we've been to different shops and definitely gone to different suburbs but shopped at the same shop. And the first moment you walk into a shopping mall or a grocery store the only things you see are options, options and more options. Back in the late 20's I'm more than sure that people didn't have many options. If someone were to compare the candy from decades ago and today's candy, I'm sure today's candy would win because we have so many brands now than earlier and we should be grateful rather than take a bite and then chuck it in the bin.
Secondly, have you noticed how many brands of clothing are in today's world? During the first and Second World War people were limited with clothes and used the same clothes every single day hand washing them. Nowadays we have dresses for girls, shorts for girls and boys, t-shirts for girls and boys and many more. Back then every woman or girl would have been wearing a dress and the boys would be wearing shirts, shorts, overalls or suits for the posh. I'm sure that we have way too many options these days than before we were even born.
Last of all, don't you think people waste money buying useless gifts for people when it's not even their birthday or Christmas. We've been spoilt with how many options we have, don't you agree? Can anyone relate to me on how adults and parents always say our money doesn't grow on a tree? At first it's makes you very unhappy because you want everything nice in the world and to know you can't have it all can be very frustrating but later on when you're older you start to realise that your parents were correct. Money doesn't grow on a tree. You have to earn it and because of all these options we're losing money or getting broke or bankrupted!
To sum it all up, I think we've been pampered with all the options in the world and don't get me wrong, they're amazing but what I'm trying to say is that we need to limit our options and learn to choose wisely and not fall into marketing traps. My strong opinion is that nowadays we have too many choices.
- Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices To what extent do you agree or disagree to this statement 72
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, at least, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 30.0 10.4138276553 288% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 24.0651302605 253% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2243.0 1615.20841683 139% => OK
No of words: 516.0 315.596192385 164% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34689922481 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76609204519 4.20363070211 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.92066974446 2.80592935109 68% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 176.041082164 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478682170543 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 682.2 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.3883449542 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2692307692 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.19230769231 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 3.4128256513 381% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314179241385 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10711673434 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103569209279 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195429339425 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707901353408 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 50.2224549098 154% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.95 12.4159519038 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.26 8.58950901804 73% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.