One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. do u agree or disagree
It is considered that people are functioning longer and their life expectancy is increasing as a result of better medical stress.I completely agree with this opinion and think that it is good to implement medical care with many facilities.
First of all,I believe that implementing the medical strain gives people a heart to love and a belief of confidence levels that less medical care can't guarantee.Even if someone is gets the least medical fear,then he might not able to survive as their immunity resistance levels will be going to drop down.This person won't be alive and enjoy every part of sparkle.For example, people who are living in a slum areas are affected by strong endemic diseases,they become weak and some may lose their growth.It is all because of improper medical issues.That's why it is more important to enrich the medical that makes people healthy.
Secondly, it is good to elderly people.Over the past 50 years,they weren't provided with all the medical facilities, but now with the good version,they feel more comfortable as they are provided with all the medical activities.For instance, if parents are working then with the improved medical mind the grandparents can look after their grandchildren which is a great benefit for working parents. Thus,advantages of improved medical aspects outweigh its disadvantages.
To sum up,I strongly believe that improved medical technology has many benefits.We should aim up to keep people as healthy as possible so that they can live longer and enjoy with ecstasy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, as a result, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1284.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21951219512 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94297713481 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609756097561 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 49.0 20.2975951904 241% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 192.016040997 49.4020404114 389% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 256.8 106.682146367 241% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 49.2 20.7667163134 237% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.8 7.06120827912 351% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257379213351 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153377361769 0.084324248473 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078448608313 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171614719407 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0762145336488 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.8 13.0946893788 212% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 21.74 50.2224549098 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 11.3001002004 198% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.88 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.6 10.1190380762 213% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 22.0 10.7795591182 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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