Learning to manage money is one of the key aspects of adult life. How in your view can individuals best learn to manage their money?
Money management is one of the most important skills that an adult must have. Some people say that it is not possible to learn how to manage money and claim it should be innate. However, I disagree with them as there are several ways that an individual can use to acquire money management skills.
One approach to learn how to spend money sensibly is to learn from parents.
By this mean, when adults go to buy something with their parents, they notice and learn how to spend money. Then they try to manage money like their parents.
In fact, youngs can not learn to do something independently.
Another possible approach is to get help from the Internet sources. Indeed, this way is useful, but the time is spent so much since we watch various videos which are loaded at the continuation.
One of the best way is to learn by mistakes. The adult who spend her money for futile things once, try not to make mistake and use her money
In fact, people try to earn money hard, they learn how to spend.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 140, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ry not to make mistake and use her money In fact, people try to earn money hard, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, then, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 821.0 1615.20841683 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 183.0 315.596192385 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48633879781 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25019864684 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 176.041082164 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573770491803 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 506.74238477 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.612852913 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.6363636364 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6363636364 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.81818181818 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.468773079476 0.244688304435 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.186824599191 0.084324248473 222% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0978393558679 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224189400891 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120480153763 0.056905535591 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.0946893788 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 12.4159519038 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.76 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 78.4519038076 34% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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