Learning to manage money is one of the key aspects of adult life. How in your view can individuals best learn to manage their money?
It is considering by some that budgeting finance is essential aspects of adulthood. It is clear that the best way someone can learn this is managing money during childhood. Firstly, I will discuss the importance of parental involvement during childhood and secondly, about the importance of having a part-time job during childhood.
Parents involvement play a vital role in educating teenagers to handle money. In other words, parents give pocket money to their child during their school and college days, and they learn to spend and manage expenses as per the budget. Furthermore, parents should financially literate their children such as the importance, investment and saving habits of money, and the difference between asset and liability. The research study indicates that those children are better at managing money whose parents are actively involved than whose parents are not.
Adults who did part-time jobs during their youngster days can proficiently manage money. To explain, many students do summer internships or part-time jobs during their holidays, which enables them to earn and learn to manage money.
In conclusion, it is extremely imperative to manage money in adult life, which can be earned especially learning during childhood through parental involvement and part-time employment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1114.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 200.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76041663522 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9481706887 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.4 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340845479097 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156788384723 0.084324248473 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105364477318 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229049048168 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044327242862 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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