In many countries ,there are 24-hour TV programs.Is it a positive or negative development?
Nowadays,we can watch TV shows and movies whenever we want,due to the development of the technology.But,how it is benefittial or useless,I will try to clarify it by giving some examples.
Sitting in front of of the TV,even for 24 hours can make noone get bored.Because,our time is spent there interestingly and we think it is a good way of killing a time.However,its effect in youngtersis not always good.Especially in the evenings,most children tend to sit in front of TV the whole night.As a result of this,they do not sleep properly and during the schooldays,they feel asleep in the class.
The next positive side of having 24-hour programmes us that,it can be found every kind of shows and variety types of movies that are attractive for us.On the other hand,there are some shows or films ehich are childish and somehow not serious.It leads young generation not to have a responsibility seriously.
The last and undeniable benefit of having 24hours available shows on TV is that we can always be familiar with breaking news,whenever we want and whether it is local or global.It has always been good tobe warned when there is an earthquake or storm in one part of the globe and if it is likely to happen in the other parts.
Consequently,the positive sides of having 24-hour programmes are more than negative effects.In fact,it depends on the people who are spending or wasting their time in front of the TV.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, so, in fact, kind of, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1176.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22343846778 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595833333333 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 20.2975951904 236% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.3754062948 49.4020404114 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 235.2 106.682146367 220% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.0 20.7667163134 231% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.8 7.06120827912 238% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177893446723 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0989244838148 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618179369532 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0989244838148 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618179369532 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.6 13.0946893788 195% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.22 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.8 11.3001002004 184% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.03 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.78957915832 306% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.2 10.1190380762 210% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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