You recently visited a place that had a strong impact on you. Now you want to write to your friend about the place.
Write a letter to a friend about the place. In your letter,
explain where the place was and how you got there
describe what you saw
offer to take your friend there
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear John,
How are you? I hope you are in the pink of health. I’m writing to you about a mysterious place I visited this summer.
Locating the temple was an adventure itself as we had to travel for 18 hours to reach the destination. It is located on a shore of Arabian sea,20 kms into the forest surrounding it. We had to trek the Western Ghats for an hour and travel through the thick jungle with the help of local tribes to reach the place.
Upon reaching, the magnificent view of the monument has erases all the tiredness of our bodies. Everyone were amused and awestruck of the design when the early rays of sun were passing through the holes and reaching the idol present inside the temple. It is not easy to comprehend in words of what we saw.
Hence, I would want you to experience the same next summer. You can come down to my city for vacation and I’ll guarantee that it’ll be a life changing moment to visit that place.
If you agree, do let me know the dates of your convenience so that I can plan the trip accordingly. Can’t wait to hear from you soon.
Yours truly,
Mihi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r from you soon. Yours truly, Mihi
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, hence, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 906.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41951219512 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30719847063 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673170731707 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3369102254 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.7142857143 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6428571429 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.85714285714 4.34317383033 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332754720478 0.216113520407 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113209745274 0.0766984524023 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106513391316 0.0603063233224 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187019074829 0.12726935374 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.162898445843 0.0580467560999 281% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.76 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.