Dear Amber,
I am hoping you are doing well with your family. I cannot wait for that to share an incredible experience in Finland with you now which make me feel how mysterious and charming the sky is. As you know I just went to catch an aurora in Inari last week and I took a 5-hour bus from Rovaniemi to Inari.
I am so lucky that I can capture the amazing moment with my eyes. An aurora formed by the solar wind carries protons and electrons to the earth rapidly. With the more and less solar wind, fast and slow, the aurora looks like a colourful ribbon dancing in the sky. This slide show from nature is definitely one of my most unforgettable memories.
I remember that you are planning to catch an aurora next year and I highly recommend you go to Inari. Mountains, lake and the aurora, how wonderful of these three things combine together to become an amazing picture. Don't forget to keep your camera warm.
Warm wishes,
Chris Wong
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Amber, I am hoping you are doing well with you...
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Suggestion:
... a 5-hour bus from Rovaniemi to Inari. I am so lucky that I can capture the am...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ne of my most unforgettable memories. I remember that you are planning to cat...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Don't
... together to become an amazing picture. Dont forget to keep your camera warm. ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Dont forget to keep your camera warm. Warm wishes, Chris Wong
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eep your camera warm. Warm wishes, Chris Wong
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 782.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49425287356 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28559396093 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672413793103 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8009272193 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.0909090909 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8181818182 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.18181818182 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140779288987 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.051202860396 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616178499796 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103194621078 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0742593745925 0.0580467560999 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.