Inspite of the advances made in agriculture many people around the country still go hungry. Why is this the case and what can be done about this problem
Although there are multiple ways to improve a country's economy,hunger and poverty has been a major barrier in boosting the economy. Despite the enhancement made agriculture , more populace are starving around the globe. This essay will identify the problems with careful consideration and put forth some solutions
On one hand ,though ancient method of farming are replaced by sophisticated machinery, hunger is still prevalent. One of the main reason is Due to the rapid decline in the lineage of farmers as well as new entrants to this profession. To site an example, many descendants of farmers are seeking better opportunities for financial stability and better living conditions.
On the other hand, the process of farming has grown in leaps and bounds, with a negligible effect on mass production. Though the workforce for farming is slowly decreasing, introduction of natural fertilizer and hybrid plants will help in facilitating a better yield. For instance, in states like Andra Pradesh, government has allowed people to cultivate in government lands , there by buying the produce at a nominal cost and significantly, creating employment opportunities.
To conclude, this essay analysed how measures can be taken to eradicate hunger by using conventional methods of farming.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, still, well, for instance, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 3.0 24.0651302605 12% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1095.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 199.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50251256281 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10933731129 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.683417085427 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 345.6 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3515337678 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.666666667 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1111111111 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11111111111 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152823946438 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052997741455 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460460794894 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0871030576959 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501994089008 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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