The reading and the lecture are both about the benefits and effects of the planting of genetically modified trees. Where the author of the reading states that plantation of this kind of tree is more beneficial, the lecturer suggests that there are some serious problems and cost effects related to genetically modified trees. The lecturer casts doubt on the main points made in the reading by providing three reasons.
First of all, according to the reading genetically modified trees are more resistant to certain natural calamities. However, the lecturer refutes this point. She says that these trees might be effective in resisting one type of natural disaster but it can not sustain the natural disasters as a whole. Furthermore, she mentions that the unmodified counterpart of the modified trees can withstand long term disasters like global warming or a sudden disaster like a pest infestation. If most of the trees are wiped out, then also some members would survive.
Secondly, the reading states that genetically modified trees are more economically efficient as they can grow at a faster rate, and also, can yield more amount of food crops than unmodified trees. Nevertheless, the lecturer disputes this argument by stating that farming with this kind of trees often put an extra burden on the farmers as the company's which sell the seeds of these trees charge more to the farmers. Moreover, the farmers can't use the seeds harvested from the full-grown trees next year, as there are some laws state that the farmers have to pay a surplus to the same company in order to sew those seeds next year.
Finally, the reading claims that using this kind of tree will help to save endangered tree species which people generally cut down for timber and burning woods. On the other hand, the lecturer believes that genetically modified trees sometimes grow without any bounds, and most of the time they are planted among the wild trees. As a result, these trees threaten the population of the wild trees and out-compete them by harvesting an enormous amount of nutrients from the soil.
In conclusion, although the reading and lecture are both about the benefits and effects of farming with genetically modified trees, the three main points made in the passage are effectively challenged by the lecturer.
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- Reading passage An airship is a type of aircraft that flies using a very large balloon filled with a lighter than air gas Airships were an important means of air transportation before the 1940s but are little used today having been largely replaced by air 76
- During our careers we work with many different kinds of people All of them have unique characteristics and personality traits In your opinion which of the following is the most important characteristic of a coworker a serious attitude regarding their work 73
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement When classmates or colleagues communicate about a project in person instead of by e mail they will produce better work for the project 73
- Nowadays people are more obsessed with buying material things like expensive clothes and cars because people judge each other according to their possessions 75
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 438, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...e to the farmers. Moreover, the farmers cant use the seeds harvested from the full-g...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 22.412803532 107% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 30.3222958057 168% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1928.0 1373.03311258 140% => OK
No of words: 383.0 270.72406181 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03394255875 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42384287591 4.04702891845 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54103477067 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 145.348785872 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501305483029 0.540411800872 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 587.7 419.366225166 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1193742265 49.2860985944 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.533333333 110.228320801 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5333333333 21.698381199 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5333333333 7.06452816374 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.3589403974 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 53.8541721854 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.2367328918 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.42419426049 96% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 63.6247240618 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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