Nowadays online shopping is extremely popular. Discuss the impact of if on the environment and on people, who lost their jobs because of it.
It is true that buying stuff on the internet has become more popular among people. This trend has some impact on the environment and on the employment of people. This essay will discuss about the negetive impect on the nature and on the mankind.
To begin with, there are several impects on the environment of buying online product. The first and foramost impect on the ecosystem is that creating air pollution. In recent years, most of people would like to buy product on the internet and this trend is increased the carbon dioxide in air because of more vehicles use for transportation and it leads air pollution. Secondly wasting the natural resources is another impact of purchase product online. Online websites are providing the product at chiper cost so it boosts buying power which directly impect on natural resources.
Moreover, it is also impact on employment of middal class warkers and shopkeeper. In the moden world, it is quite difficult for small shops and retailers to compete with this types of websites on the level of prices. As a result, many shops owner do not have sufficant money to run their business so sometime face deficulties on their business like they do not pay salary to worker and sometime they dismissal their worker which leads unemployment in the market.
To Conclude, Purchasing product with help of the internet is grow significantly among people. However, It has some adverse impact on the environments like air pollution and west of resources, and creats unemployment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 182, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...reating air pollution. In recent years, most of people would like to buy product on the intern...
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Line 3, column 170, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...all shops and retailers to compete with this types of websites on the level of price...
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Line 4, column 62, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'grown'.
Suggestion: grown
...ng product with help of the internet is grow significantly among people. However, It...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, as a result, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 5.60731707317 303% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 965.302439024 131% => OK
No of words: 252.0 196.424390244 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00396825397 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66286991145 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 106.607317073 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539682539683 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 283.868780488 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.7837974441 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3846153846 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 5.23603664747 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168158025457 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546018867332 0.103423049105 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339144849256 0.0843802449381 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0926079922266 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0196475348577 0.0819641961636 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 40.7170731707 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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