Write a complaint letter to the manager of the airport about a problem with something you have encountered that is important to get fixed. in your letter
: Provide details of your flight. Explain about the problem that you had. Suggest a solution.
To the manager,
Tribhuwan international airport, Nepal
My name is Begraj Pudasainee and I am writing this letter to complain about my unsatisfactory experience I had at the airport last week.
Let me explain you my travel itinerary, I landed at the airport on 23rd of february by dragon Airlines flight number AF209 at 2100 hrs. I had boarded on the flight in Singapore at 1700 local time.
There were a couple of drawbacks I encountered after getting off the plane. The first problem was that there were 100s of people stranded in the arrival counter due to lack of knowledge to fill the Arrival Notification Form. The travellers were not sure whether the forms needed to be filled or not being as a native citizen as most of them were illiterate. However, when I went through the form and found that it was written clearly that the form was only for the foreigners.There were no one to assist the poor passengers. likewise, the other problem I noticed was the untidiness of the surroundings and the toilets. The laboratories were filthy and smelt disgusting.
I believe, the concerned authority should pay a close attention to such amenities as soon as possible. The airline should designate the staff sufficiently to assist the travellers. The toilets must be cleaned several times in a day to maintain the rewarding standard and hygiene. The floors should be vacuumed and time and again and kept spotless all the time.
Yours faithfully,
Beg
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Let me explain you my travel itinerary
Let me explain to you my travel itinerary
due to lack of knowledge
due to the lack of knowledge
flaws:
No. of Words: 248 200
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 10
No. of Words: 248 200
No. of Characters: 1174 1000
No. of Different Words: 157 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.968 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.734 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.706 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 85 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 65 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 38 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 28 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.714 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.586 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.143 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.298 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.638 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.087 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4