Write a complaint letter to the manager of the airport about a problem with something you have encountered that is important to get fixed in your letter Provide details of your flight Explain about the problem that you had Suggest a solution

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Write a complaint letter to the manager of the airport about a problem with something you have encountered that is important to get fixed. in your letter
: Provide details of your flight. Explain about the problem that you had. Suggest a solution.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to complain about the bad experience which I had at RGIA Airport, Hyderabad. I travelled to Delhi on 22nd February and the flight number is "ABC123".

The employee who was at check-in luggage did not behave correctly. I told him that the check-in bag contains some fragile item, therefore, if possible keep my bag on top of others or at least do not put heavy weight bags on top of mine. He replayed harshly and said that "it is not possible and cancel your trip.", I requested him politely, but his response was terrible.

I am requesting you to talk to him and take necessary actions, either ask him to change his behaviour or replace him with another person who has a good tone.

I would be grateful if you could take one of these actions as soon as possible. I have my next trip in a month, and I hope the issue would be sorted out by that time.

Your's Faithfully,

Nagarajender Rao

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to complain abo...
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Line 7, column 204, Rule ID: HEAVY_WEIGHT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'heavyweight'?
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...on top of others or at least do not put heavy weight bags on top of mine. He replayed harshl...
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Line 10, column 159, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ith another person who has a good tone. I would be grateful if you could take on...
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Line 13, column 81, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e of these actions as soon as possible. I have my next trip in a month, and I hop...
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Line 18, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...by that time. Yours Faithfully, Nagarajender Rao
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, at least

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 5.60731707317 535% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 813.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69942196532 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7883688485 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.693641618497 0.547539520022 127% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 1.53170731707 653% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.2587561239 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3333333333 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2222222222 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55555555556 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126207434407 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0491238328208 0.103423049105 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04801260997 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0678495046633 0.15604864568 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502310807883 0.0819641961636 61% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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