What are the advantages and disadvantages of leaving your country to live or study abroad

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What are the advantages and disadvantages of leaving your country to live or study abroad?

In this ever-changing world, people have various desires including going abroad either to study or live. Lots of benefits there are to be obtained for people planning to study and live in a foreign country. However, these benefits come with their set of problems.

To start with plus sides, the possibility of broadening horizon and expanding network are some of the common advantages of moving to another country. Inevitably, you are living abroad means you have some priviliges including making new friends and experiencing the diversity of cultures, traditions and languages. For instance, while you are living or studying abroad you are supposed to learn a new language. Being able to speak in language other than your own native language is counted one of the advantages of living in a foreign country.

On the other hand, being away from home either working or studying is not that an easy process, especially for someone who has never been to other countries on his own. Homesickness must come first when listing the downsides of immigrating to another country. Living in area where you feel more confident because there are friends and relatives who could help you in need might not seem a huge opportunity. But once you have decided to relocate, you will likely appreciate it as you will have to deal with quite everything on your own. Second, but not least even though you are fluent in host country's language you are bound to face culture shocks where a bunch of confusing moments come up. Every nations have their own distinct cultures and tradions. You might easily be involved in argument with locals as a result of limited knowledge of that land's cultural tradions.

To sum up, going abroad to live and study has become prevelant among many people. Whilst you improve yourself and broaden your outlook, experiencing the different lifestyle to your typical one, you might have many issues while you are away from home where you grew up and have close friends and lovely family.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 91, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ening horizon and expanding network are some of the common advantages of moving to another ...
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Line 5, column 693, Rule ID: EACH_EVERY_NNS[1]
Message: 'Each' and 'every' are used with singular. Did you mean 'all'?
Suggestion: All
...e a bunch of confusing moments come up. Every nations have their own distinct culture...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, second, so, while, for instance, as a result, to start with, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95535714286 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51473654136 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553571428571 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1128153076 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0625 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185872701943 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690074033616 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598674401554 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135262245027 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472013324624 0.056905535591 83% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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