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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 97, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'happiest' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: happiest
...first teachers. Leaving with parents is most happiest thing in the world. But, in some countr...
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Line 1, column 97, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'most the happiest'.
Suggestion: most the happiest
...first teachers. Leaving with parents is most happiest thing in the world. But, in some countr...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 166, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: teenage
...rld. But, in some countries children at teen age, when they finish their school, are lea...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 277, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r to live in an individual or shared the apartment with their colleagues or frien...
^^
Line 1, column 348, Rule ID: DT_DT[2]
Message: Maybe you need to remove the second determiner so that only 'the' or 'this' is left.
Suggestion: the; this
...es or friends. I strongly disagree with the this statement. It has benefits too, drawbac...
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Line 2, column 70, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng their parents they are independent to live and free to whatever they want to d...
^^
Line 3, column 638, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ents and spend time with their friends. On the other hand, it has some advantage...
^^^
Line 4, column 56, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'learns'.
Suggestion: learns
...nd, it has some advantages too. Student learn new skills like management skill, commu...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 279, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: money
...r example, when student have not enough money money for their rent and daily expenses at th...
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Line 4, column 346, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...and daily expenses at that time they do part time job and know about it how to manage the...
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Line 5, column 46, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun advantage seems to be countable; consider using: 'many advantages'.
Suggestion: many advantages
...nclusion, leaving home after school has many advantage, its negative effect far from their ben...
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Line 5, column 199, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...o not leave their parents after school. In suggestion, if they want privacy then t...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1939.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 409.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74083129584 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19703341822 2.80592935109 78% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.449877750611 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 598.5 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.3205337943 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.95 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.45 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.399293491177 0.244688304435 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139075511873 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108561167763 0.0667982634062 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.268322521694 0.151304729494 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119201649044 0.056905535591 209% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.