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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: Remansou
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- Some people think that getting a degree from university is the best way to guarantee a good job Others believe that it would be better to go straight into work and get experience instead Discuss both sides and give your opinion 81
- Some people think that climate change could have a negative effect on business Other people think that climate change could create more business opportunities Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
- Some people think that climate impacts business in a negative way but others believe that it provides more business opportunities Discuss both views and give your opinion 87
- Today many children spend a lot of time playing computer games and little time on sports Why is it Is it a positive or negative development 84
- Some people say that e books and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magzines to what extent do you agree or disagree 41
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 88, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...f fresh water is going down day by day. According to me there are several potential reasons of...
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Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ording to me there are several potential reasons of this issue and some measures ...
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Line 3, column 133, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of underground water. Firstly, nowadays electricity is being used in almost all...
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Line 3, column 160, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tly, nowadays electricity is being used in almost all technical advancements suc...
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Line 3, column 482, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...manufactured to supply. For an example - “Bhakhra Dam” is a concrete gravity dam ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...of reducing water. Secondly, some people do not care about saving water as they ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y, some people do not care about saving water as they sometimes forget to put of...
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Line 3, column 806, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Finally
...to the wastage of limited water sources.Finally,increasing food requirements by large p...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , increasing
...wastage of limited water sources.Finally,increasing food requirements by large population i...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n technical advancements completely. So, more technology means more energy requir...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...gy requirement; however, scientists must try to make search on those things that ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...help to save water. In addition to this, irrigating crops by storing rainwater is...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...rrigating crops by storing rainwater is an most important idea as instead of pumpi...
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Line 5, column 819, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of pumping fresh water from underground rain water must be stored for giving to...
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Line 5, column 846, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...m underground rain water must be stored for giving to crops which would not only...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... of underground water yet there are many solutions that could be applied with col...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, in addition, no doubt, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2083.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 404.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15594059406 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92742473462 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559405940594 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 656.1 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.2380447419 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.866666667 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9333333333 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203810096756 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720198622273 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448828637828 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145418192897 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0343157310481 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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