The passage and lecture are both about Chevalier de Seingalt'life,and the accuracy of his memoir. Writer of passage arised doubts about the accurecy of the memoir. lecturer casts doubt on claim made in article, he says,these memoirs are predictible and there are realible historical sources.
First, the author mentions, while Chevalier was living in Switzerland, he was very rich, in the other hand, there are recently evidence surface that he borrowed money from swiss merchant. This point challenged by lecturer, he states, however Chevalier lost his money on parties and gambling and he need time for his money to process and reach, therefofe, he need to borrow cash money.
Second, the author believes that the conversation between Chevalier and famous writer Voltaire are skeptical, he point out that it is imposible to remember exact phrases from long conversation held many years. This argument rebutted by the professor, he points out, Chevalier, each night, wrote the conversation that occured between him and Voltaire, and Chevalier'friend saw him when he wrote these conversation.
Finally, the author elaborates on Chevalier escaping from prison by doing hole in the ceiling and scape from it is a such daring escap makes for enjoyable reading and he suggests that Chevalier' friends help him to escape. In the other hand, the professor points out, all presons have friends and can bride not only Chevalier, furthermore, all evidence says that all cieling of preson were fixed after Chevalier'escaping.
The passage and lecture are both about Chevalier de Seingalt'life,and the accuracy of his memoir. Writer of passage arised doubts about the accurecy of the memoir. lecturer casts doubt on claim made in article, he says,these memoirs are predictible and there are realible historical sources.
First, the author mentions, while Chevalier was living in Switzerland, he was very rich, in the other hand, there are recently evidence surface that he borrowed money from swiss merchant. This point challenged by lecturer, he states, however Chevalier lost his money on parties and gambling and he need time for his money to process and reach, therefofe, he need to borrow cash money.
Second, the author believes that the conversation between Chevalier and famous writer Voltaire are skeptical, he point out that it is imposible to remember exact phrases from long conversation held many years. This argument rebutted by the professor, he points out, Chevalier, each night, wrote the conversation that occured between him and Voltaire, and Chevalier'friend saw him when he wrote these conversation.
Finally, the author elaborates on Chevalier escaping from prison by doing hole in the ceiling and scape from it is a such daring escap makes for enjoyable reading and he suggests that Chevalier' friends help him to escape. In the other hand, the professor points out, all presons have friends and can bride not only Chevalier, furthermore, all evidence says that all cieling of preson were fixed after Chevalier'escaping.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 30.3222958057 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1275.0 1373.03311258 93% => OK
No of words: 240.0 270.72406181 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3125 5.08290768461 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86877042476 2.5805825403 111% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 145.348785872 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.540411800872 111% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 419.366225166 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 3.25607064018 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 21.2450331126 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.7994107711 49.2860985944 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.666666667 110.228320801 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 21.698381199 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11111111111 7.06452816374 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 4.19205298013 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331624438877 0.272083759551 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.188469271975 0.0996497079465 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.210216655359 0.0662205650399 317% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232320359787 0.162205337803 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.298508025325 0.0443174109184 674% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.3589403974 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.8541721854 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.0289183223 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.2367328918 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.42419426049 108% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 63.6247240618 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.498013245 118% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.