Nowadays in certain countries a growing numbervof people are facing health issues, as a result of excessiveconsumtion fast food. Therefore, some people think, it is important for governments banning hazardous food items also put in force a higher tax for this kind of food. In this essay, both sides of the topic will be discussed.
First of all, itis undeniable that, junk foods full of ingridents which are full of harmful to the human body. Furthermore, it causes many illnesses, especially concerns. Additonally, it brings to obesity, these days many people are suffering from this kind of illness.
However, many peoplechoose it to eat for lunch or dinner. Becouse, it is prepared fast and not expensive. Also big part of population are middle class people. It wil not be true if tax is imposed for consuming fast food. I think, it will be good for both of goverenments adn people, if government make an attempt to educate people according to its harmful sides. Moreover, governments will forbid ingridents which are unhealthy and injurious for human and also adding them during preparation this kind os food.
All in all, i excessively disagree that, governmant set graeter tax for junk food, i support that instead of implementing tax, it will be good for both government and people if they will be educated, and government shoul prohibit unhealty ingridents.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...sides of the topic will be discussed. First of all, itis undeniable that, junk...
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... suffering from this kind of illness. However, many peoplechoose it to eat for...
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Suggestion: Also,
... it is prepared fast and not expensive. Also big part of population are middle class...
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...during preparation this kind os food. All in all, i excessively disagree that,...
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...vernmant set graeter tax for junk food, i support that instead of implementing ta...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, i think, kind of, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1144.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06194690265 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93567981767 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597345132743 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.1775503183 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3846153846 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328642126021 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109453823047 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0874618877584 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200492980247 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0825902364136 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sides of the topic will be discussed. First of all, itis undeniable that, junk...
^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... suffering from this kind of illness. However, many peoplechoose it to eat for...
^^^
Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... it is prepared fast and not expensive. Also big part of population are middle class...
^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...during preparation this kind os food. All in all, i excessively disagree that,...
^^^
Line 4, column 87, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...vernmant set graeter tax for junk food, i support that instead of implementing ta...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, i think, kind of, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1144.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06194690265 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93567981767 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597345132743 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.1775503183 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3846153846 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328642126021 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109453823047 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0874618877584 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200492980247 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0825902364136 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.