In today's modern world, technology has developed at a fast pace. Technological devices such as survillance video or mobile phone are used for monitoring public activities these days. In the most common case, many people do not realize that they are being monitored. Although the technology has drawbacks I do believe that it has many benefits for communities and the following essay will discuss it in detail.
On the one hand, some people believe that this kind of cameras which observe your work or your word, are against human rights and also, forbid partly people's freedom. Furthermore, the data could be sold another party, bussiness or political party for the purpose hurt or harm someone.
On the other hand, it can not be denied, there are many advantages if they are used in appropriate way. To examplify, currently, many shops markets set cameras for their safety and for products will not steal in any case. If products or materials are stolen, it will be easy to find theives. Moreover, the cameras are good tools for police department to prevents and investigate any crime activities.
To sum up, I personally believe that cameras or cel phones bring many advantages if they are used appropriately in any case.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, as for, kind of, such as, in any case, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 41.998997996 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1027.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 206.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9854368932 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65299589491 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631067961165 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.9390924941 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.3636363636 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.45454545455 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325570860729 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111073084131 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610103764677 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175986131924 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06138196074 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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