Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to complain about an electrical gadget I have recently purchased from your store but unfortunately it does not work.
Last week I bought a 25 Litre microwave oven from your LG branch in Sahibabad. Being your customer for a long, did not get it checked there. when I took it home and plugged it in the power supply it did not even turn on.
I immediately called your customer service to book my complaint, they assured me that my case would be followed up. However, I hadn't receive any back call yet. Despite of my numerous calls, I am unable to get an appropriate response.
Hereof, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction for the inconvenience I am facing. As this product is under guarantee, I want to demand a replacement for it by today or latest by tomorrow.
I look forward for your prompt action.
Thanking You,
Yours faithfully,
Chhavi Arora
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 142, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...r a long, did not get it checked there. when I took it home and plugged it in the po...
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Line 7, column 128, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: hadn't
...y case would be followed up. However, I hadnt receive any back call yet. Despite of m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, look
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 5.60731707317 571% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 750.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77707006369 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87321162542 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.713375796178 0.547539520022 130% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 1.53170731707 588% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9027447717 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.1818181818 112.824112599 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2727272727 22.9334400587 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.63636363636 5.23603664747 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174544934672 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656408388237 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532393197519 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0859640106821 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447363303434 0.0819641961636 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.2329268293 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.85 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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