A pet belonging to a friend of yours recently passed away. Write a letter to console your friend. In your letter include :
• Your condolences.
• What kind of animal it was.
• Something you think will raise your friend’s spirits.
Dear John,
I am writing this letter to express my condolence on the demise of your pet - Tommy, which happened last Sunday.
I heard this devastating news from your brother when he met me in a grocery store near my place. I feel terrible about this unpleasant event as she was extremely significant for all of us. I am really sorry for this situation and hope things get better soon.
Furthermore, I would miss your dog a lot and the memories and time spent with her. I always loved her black and yellow coloured hair, which was distinctive in a breed such as Labrador. However, I believe that she would be with us forever because her of the puppies as they would remind us of their mother.
I understand how it feels to lose an intrinsic component of a household; however, your term exams are approaching soon and you must study hard in order to do well in your examinations. The tremendous result would make your family joyful and aid to come out of the mishappening.
I look forward to hearing a positive response from you soon.
Yours truly,
Chirag
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2023-06-26 | lethanhngan | view | |
| 2021-06-17 | Mariamirabella | 73 | view |
| 2021-01-16 | Chirag Bhardwaj | 73 | view |
| 2020-10-20 | naveedforu | 77 | view |
| 2019-08-13 | hany mohamed | 81 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 98, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...et me in a grocery store near my place. I feel terrible about this unpleasant eve...
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Line 5, column 190, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...as extremely significant for all of us. I am really sorry for this situation and ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, look, really, so, well, i feel, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 883.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64736842105 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60257351238 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.694736842105 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6146729641 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2727272727 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2727272727 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90909090909 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237426502347 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0922982200448 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0827957331138 0.0603063233224 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116191347441 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0815920573608 0.0580467560999 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.