In some countries around the world men and women are having children late in life.
What are the reasons for the development?What are the effects on society and family life?
It is undeniable that getting married and having children is a part of human life. Owing to this, marrying not only involves bonding with the partner, but also giving enrich nourishment to an infant to carry-forward family name. Until the 20th century, people use to get married by the age of eighteen to twenty-two. However, these days, the majority of the younger generation defy to commit to marriage before turning twenty-five. There are many factors for the development of getting married late and having children late in life.
When compared to a rise in inflation, the earning capacity has not shown substantial growth, due to which youngsters try to get a better education as per their financial capabilities. Apart from that, the competitive environment is disquieting to get right job after completion of education. It is estimated that it takes twenty-five years to complete education to earn a primary livelihood and enjoy the social life. Furthermore, it is also challenging to find a compatible partner and get married because of exorbitant expectations. Moreover, the financial planning for giving birth to a child is required to avoid expenditure burden in future. To say the least, it takes thirty to thirty five years to start planning for newborn.
Somehow late development of child affects the family life as well as society. For old-age, the parents are depended on their children, it is challenging to retire by the age of fifty-five to sixty, until the child starts earning, with such life cycle. The stress on parents to fulfil the family desires is causing detrimental health issues. If the children do not acquire proper education and skills at the right age, the society may hinder growth, along the way, the burden on the government may increase to suffice the needs of the population.
To sum up, the reduction in education cost may help to solve this problem, and also if part-time opportunities are made available for students, it can relatively be helpful for the society to provide skills for the child's future as well as saving some money for the future plannings. Initiatives to educate about family planning must be taken to ensure fiscal growth.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 261, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...ly name. Until the 20th century, people use to get married by the age of eighteen t...
^^^
Line 2, column 454, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'finding'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: finding
...fe. Furthermore, it is also challenging to find a compatible partner and get married be...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 636, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...is required to avoid expenditure burden in future. To say the least, it takes thirty to t...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'retiring'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: retiring
...ed on their children, it is challenging to retire by the age of fifty-five to sixty, unti...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, apart from, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1827.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06094182825 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82424066902 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562326869806 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6135731407 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.470588235 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2352941176 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58823529412 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203138113661 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691727328939 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.087573403493 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122252907021 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533500348578 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 261, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...ly name. Until the 20th century, people use to get married by the age of eighteen t...
^^^
Line 2, column 454, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'finding'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: finding
...fe. Furthermore, it is also challenging to find a compatible partner and get married be...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 636, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...is required to avoid expenditure burden in future. To say the least, it takes thirty to t...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'retiring'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: retiring
...ed on their children, it is challenging to retire by the age of fifty-five to sixty, unti...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, apart from, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1827.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06094182825 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82424066902 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562326869806 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6135731407 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.470588235 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2352941176 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58823529412 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203138113661 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691727328939 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.087573403493 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122252907021 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533500348578 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.