The two maps depict the way to get into City Hospital in two different years, 2007 and 2010. Overall, it is readily apparent that during 3-year-period, a lot of modifications were made.
In detail, previously there were 6 Bus Stops along the Hospital Road in 2007. But in 2010, those Bus Stops were demolished, and as a replacement a Bus Station was built on the Southwestern side of the map. Moreover, two Roundabouts were also constructed where the first Roundabout was built in the three-way-intersection of Ring Road and Hospital Road, and another Roundabout was placed in the four-way-intersection of City Road and Hospital Road. Both Roundabouts also provided access to the Bus Station.
Lastly, in 2007 the Car Park was used for both staffs and visitors, and was situated in the Southeastern side of the map. However, in 2010, the former Car Park was only used for Staffs. Meanwhile, visitors parked their vehicles in a new Car Park building which was built in the northeastern side of the map. Both car parks were accessible from the Ring Road.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, lastly, moreover, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 880.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91620111732 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21487872412 2.65546596893 121% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530726256983 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.6297444417 43.030603864 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 5.23603664747 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315041353181 0.215688989381 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127283005125 0.103423049105 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113518275017 0.0843802449381 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225724693378 0.15604864568 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0811597058575 0.0819641961636 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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