Sometimes people have to live in a country which require them to speak with foreign language. Some people argue that it will cause significant social and practical problems. I completely agree with the statement that having to speak foreign language will cause both social and practical problems.
Firstly, this is because, language is significant in doing social interaction with people. Thus, if one does not master the foreign language, he will most likely to be an outsider in a social community. This can happen not only in neighborhood, but also in the workplace. For example, James just moved from US to Taiwan, where he have to speak a foreign language that he does not really master, Mandarin Chinese. As a result, he often can not interact properly with his colleagues in the workplace, and he can not join their social groups.
Secondly, language is also crucial related to the practical things, in doing our daily activities. This can be riding public transportation, ordering food in a restaurant, to understanding local announcement. Therefore, someone that does not understand the foreign language well will face practical problems in doing their daily activities. For instance, John is a foreigner from UK who just moved to a city in China. Almost all the transportation signs and food menu are written in Mandarin Chinese. Because he does not really understand them, he faces problem in doing his daily activities.
In conclusion, I completely agree that having to speak foreign language will cause both social and practical problems because language is significant in doing social interaction and also crucial in doing our daily activities.
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- Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 69
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 331, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
... just moved from US to Taiwan, where he have to speak a foreign language that he doe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22388059701 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88550351608 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473880597015 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.2573035346 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3333333333 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8666666667 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.13333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366813377402 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12971418691 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0972756764961 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250065692148 0.151304729494 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.071568336486 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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