Our life faces advance improvement in technology, in order to be familiar with this innovation, youngster is the important part of people, they are the step-stone in this society. The question is, whether, organization and planning is essential thing in our life, this can be weighed in many aspects. In my perceptive, I concur that young people should learn how manage their time. In this essay I will elaborate to a couple reason for explaining my point of view.
First, and foremost, organization and planning are very beneficial, this is mainly due to the fact that, by doing so, young people can reach their goals easily and in short time, especially when they arrange for the future like study hard and choose a perfect career which is interested with, as a result they can gain a good future job and get a happy lifestyle, in addition, arrange our life give us opportunity to do many tasks in ideal time with perfect result, moreover, managing time let people to balance their life, do their hobbies in addition to find time that can spend with families, look after of kids, help them in their homework, furthermore family can enjoy with each other. As you see, the importance of organizing of live for everyone to get a suitable career and happy live.
Furthermore, with increasing of our live demand, we need to plan and arrange our finance in order to never get in trouble in any situation that may be faced, for example, before three years ago, I had worked in a advertising company, then my manager fired me, I spent five month without working, I can manage this problem because I always save part of my salary to used it in difficult days, therefore I can take care of my family, this situation prove my idea about importance of planning and organization effect in our life.
To sum up, the statement as persuasive as it stands, due to my expositions mentioned above, which explained the importance of arrangement and planning our life to get a perfect career and balance life.
Our life faces advance improvement in technology, in order to be familiar with this innovation, youngster is the important part of people, they are the step-stone in this society. The question is, whether, organization and planning is essential thing in our life, this can be weighed in many aspects. In my perceptive, I concur that young people should learn how manage their time. In this essay I will elaborate to a couple reason for explaining my point of view.
First, and foremost, organization and planning are very beneficial, this is mainly due to the fact that, by doing so, young people can reach their goals easily and in short time, especially when they arrange for the future like study hard and choose a perfect career which is interested with, as a result they can gain a good future job and get a happy lifestyle, in addition, arrange our life give us opportunity to do many tasks in ideal time with perfect result, moreover, managing time let people to balance their life, do their hobbies in addition to find time that can spend with families, look after of kids, help them in their homework, furthermore family can enjoy with each other. As you see, the importance of organizing of live for everyone to get a suitable career and happy live.
Furthermore, with increasing of our live demand, we need to plan and arrange our finance in order to never get in trouble in any situation that may be faced, for example, before three years ago, I had worked in a advertising company, then my manager fired me, I spent five month without working, I can manage this problem because I always save part of my salary to used it in difficult days, therefore I can take care of my family, this situation prove my idea about importance of planning and organization effect in our life.
To sum up, the statement as persuasive as it stands, due to my expositions mentioned above, which explained the importance of arrangement and planning our life to get a perfect career and balance life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, look, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, for example, in addition, in short, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1648.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 348.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73563218391 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64535179407 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557471264368 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 20.1344086022 214% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 216.212243814 48.9658058833 442% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 206.0 100.406767564 205% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 43.5 20.6045352989 211% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.5 5.45110844103 284% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387874182974 0.236089414692 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.194674691645 0.076458572812 255% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.181500779505 0.0737576698707 246% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255116755664 0.150856017488 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.175122922165 0.0645574589148 271% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.6 11.7677419355 192% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.29 58.1214874552 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 10.1575268817 186% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.1 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.0537634409 191% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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