The bar chart illustrates on the proportion of British people of five different ages according money to donation for the years 1990 and 2010.
Overall, it is clear that a percentage of British people gave money to charity in 1990 than they did in 2010. In addition, elder people doneted more for charity than younger counterparts.
About over 15 percent of people aged from 18 to 25 years old in 1990 devoted to charity and about 17 percent in 2010. The percentage of people between 51 and 65 years old spent more money for donation in 1990 whereas the proportion of people from 36 to 50 years of age devoted more money for charity in 2010, which accounted for over 40 percent. In contrast, for the youngest people was the lowest in 2010, at above 5 percent.
The percentage of British people advent of the age of 65 years old dropped dramatically their donation to charity between 1990 and 2010. The percentage of people who was 51 and above in 1990 declined by under 5 percent. The figur for people in the 51-65 age group was exactly 35percent in 1990, compared to over 30 percent of the 65 puls age group. The proportion for people between 51 years old and above in 1990 was lower than the figur for those in 2010.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 221, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ve in 1990 declined by under 5 percent. The figur for people in the 51-65 age group...
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Line 5, column 350, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...er 30 percent of the 65 puls age group. The proportion for people between 51 years ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
whereas, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 883.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4595959596 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34865862287 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.419191919192 0.547539520022 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 252.0 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3430188606 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1111111111 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.23603664747 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377231746506 0.215688989381 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.192198337763 0.103423049105 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0880987793748 0.0843802449381 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.279447604781 0.15604864568 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583588486367 0.0819641961636 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 11.4140731707 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.