Your local newspaper wants to reward people who have contributed a lot to the community.
Write a letter to the newspaper. In your letter:
• suggest someone who deserves the reward
• mention what they have done to help the community
• say what reward you would like to give this person
HELLO SIR ,
I AM WRITING THIS LETTER TO NOMINATE SOMEONE WHO DESERVE THIS REWARD BY YOUR NEWSPAPER. LAST WEEK I HAD READ IN YOUR NEWSPAPER THAT YOU WANTS TO REWARD SOMEONE WHO HAVE CONTRIBUTED A LOT TO THE COMMUNITY.AND THERE IS A MAN NAMED GAUTAM IN OUR NEIGHBOURHOOD.HE IS A TEACHER BY PROFESSION.
SUBSEQUENTLLY, HE TEACHES POOR STUDENTS FREE IN OUR SOCIETY GROUND AFTER HIS SCHOOL.HE IS A PASSIONATE TEACHER AND HE DO THIS NOVEL DEED ONLY FOR HIS SATISFACTION.OTHERWISE, THERE IS NO PERSONAL BENEFIT IN IT.HE NEVER ADVERTISE HIS WORK FOR FAME.I HAVE SEEN MANY PEOPLE WHO USED TO POST THEIR DONATION OR NOBLE DEEDS ON THE SOCIAL MEDIA.
BUT HE IS THE MAN WHO GENUINLY WANTS TO DO SOMETHING FOR THE COMMUNITY.I HAVE A REQUEST FROM YOU TO PROVIDE HIM A PROPER INFRASTRUCTURE. BECAUSE DURING RAINY SEASON THEY DID NOT CONTINUE THEIR TEACHING.SO I THINK WE SHOULD SUPPORT HIM SO THAT POOR STUDENTS CAN STUDY ANY DISRUPTION.
I AM WAITING FOR YOUR FRUITFUL REPONSE.
THANK YOU
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| 2021-01-23 | Jay Thakkar | 67 | view |
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Comments
Dear Sir, Greetings for the…
Dear Sir,
Greetings for the day! I am writing this letter to nominate a person, for an award that your newspaper honors to appreciate the noble voluntary work. The person’s name is Louis Prastil and he is the president of our community council.
At the onset, I highly believe that Mr. Louis could win this award. He is the president of our local community council. He is a doctor by profession and working as a full-time doctor, and part time volunteer worker at a community hospital. Despite of working at the community hospital, he serves humanity in collaboration with many non-governmental organizations.
Further, I could tell a lot about Mr. Louis as I have known him for about 10 years now. As we live in the same community, I have seen him helping the community over many years. Although we do not live in the same area, we at least meet twice a week, for various arrangements to help the society. Also, we often meet at the community functions and events. As I too like to be a part of the volunteer work, our paths cross on frequent basis and I have privileged to work with him on many social events.
Lastly, I would like to tell you a recent example of his help to the neighborhood. Since, he is the president of our community council, he knows almost everybody in the society and everyone around him loves him for what he does for all of us. Recently, because of the heavy rain fall in our region, many houses were damaged and many of our community members were highly affected by the calamity. After the storm, Louis himself had visited all the affected houses and asked for any sort of help anybody needed. He supplied food packets, distributed medical first-aid kits to all the impacted families, and arranged shelter for their stay. In fact, he also took an aged couple to his home. Mr. Louis is not only our hero, but also pride and great inspiration of the community.
Hope you will see his dedication towards the community and humanity, and select him for your prestigious award.
Thank you, 1/12/2021
Judy Ross
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
HELLO SIR , I AM WRITING THIS LETTER TO NOMINATE ...
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Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
HELLO SIR , I AM WRITING THIS LETTER TO NOMINATE SOM...
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Line 2, column 137, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[4]
Message: The pronoun 'YOU' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'want'
Suggestion: Want
...K I HAD READ IN YOUR NEWSPAPER THAT YOU WANTS TO REWARD SOMEONE WHO HAVE CONTRIBUTED ...
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Line 3, column 119, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'HE' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: Does
...CHOOL.HE IS A PASSIONATE TEACHER AND HE DO THIS NOVEL DEED ONLY FOR HIS SATISFACTI...
^^
Line 3, column 219, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'HE' must be used with a third-person verb: 'advertises'.
Suggestion: Advertises
...E IS NO PERSONAL BENEFIT IN IT.HE NEVER ADVERTISE HIS WORK FOR FAME.I HAVE SEEN MANY PEOP...
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Line 3, column 246, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...IT.HE NEVER ADVERTISE HIS WORK FOR FAME.I HAVE SEEN MANY PEOPLE WHO USED TO POST ...
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Line 4, column 71, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...WANTS TO DO SOMETHING FOR THE COMMUNITY.I HAVE A REQUEST FROM YOU TO PROVIDE HIM ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 814.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84523809524 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1884213337 2.54303337028 125% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672619047619 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 16.3608247423 171% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.843584682 44.8134815571 225% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 135.666666667 76.5299724578 177% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 16.8248392259 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266116795659 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122631745942 0.0766984524023 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106199197517 0.0603063233224 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149807735794 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.151893254388 0.0580467560999 262% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 8.37731958763 184% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 70.7449484536 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 7.45979381443 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.38 7.59969072165 137% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.2 8.54432989691 154% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.