the table illustrates the information about a people, from 30 to 50 years old, spend their pastime for different activities in eight different countries.
Overall, reading is most favorable activities for time pass in given countries except Canada, Australia and USA where majority of people spend their leisure time in watching television.
In Canada and USA, around equal numbers of In Canada and USA around equal numbers of 30 to 50 years old people spend their free time to watch television, sport, reading, hobbies and sleep. While, 23% people prefer music and 30% choose beach as a favorite leisure activity in the USA and 3% of people prefer music as their free time activity in Canada. France and England show similar pattern, in which reading, hobbies and music is most favorable leisure activity which accounts for 30%, 20% and 4% in both countries. Korean and Chinese people spend their Most pastimes in reading and hobbies, Whereas music beach and sleep is less common to timepass in this country.
It is interesting to note that Australian people spend their leisure time in all activities. And in fact, they dominated in most of activities than other countries people. while 62% of Japanese people choose only reading to pass their time and no other activities is done by Japanese people for Leisure time.
- With the rise in popularity of the internet newspapers will soon become a thing of the past To what extent do you agree or disagree 10
- Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs for example working for a charity improving the neighborhood or teaching sport to younger children To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in English who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 200 and 2010. 61
- With the rise in popularity of the internet newspapers will soon become a thing of the past To what extent do you agree or disagree
- The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in English who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 200 and 2010. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, whereas, while, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1103.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 220.0 196.424390244 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01363636364 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46517479641 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504545454545 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 336.6 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1324723145 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.555555556 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4444444444 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0684037536611 0.215688989381 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0378217083955 0.103423049105 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624455447463 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0715486622619 0.15604864568 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0796513235634 0.0819641961636 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.