It is undeniable fact that, due to advancement of technology pollution level is augmenting alarmingly. some scientists also warned people about the detrimental effect of environmental problems and limit the use of energy sources.Although many people do not aware about this problems. The reason behind this is, consumerism behaviour and industrial revolution. However, if government start campaign and spread awareness to the people about harmful effect of environmental and energy problem then some extent it will cause positive impact to curb pollution.
There are many reasons for this issue. First of all, after industrial revolution automobile industries increasing rapidly and price of every vehicles is also declined, so any middle calss person can easily afford it. That's why more and more vehicles are flooded in the road and due to highly usage of vehicles pollution level is also increasing alarmingly. Another reason for this issue is advancement of technology. To be specify, due to fast paces of lifestyle people do not have enough time, so generally they use their private vehicles for transportation because to waiting for a bus seems like wasting of time. That's why mostly people use private vehicle rather than public vehicle and it will ultimately result in air pollution. And natural resources are burn to run the vehicles so it will also affect natural energy.what is more, nowadays, due to consumerism behaviour most people use used and throw technique, so this type of behavior can also affect the environment. Moreover, easily availability of plastic bag can also create negative impact on environment.
The solution for curb environmental and energy problem is, if government provide more public transportation amenities for people in low price then upto some extent people must try to avoid travelling by their private vehicles, so ultimately pollution level cause by vehicles can also be reduced. Secondly, government should start some campaign to aware people about detrimental effect of environment pollution. Because if more and more people are involved in this campaign than it can helpful to curb environmental and energy related problems.
In conclusion, the solution to curb environment and energy problem is not an easy task.However, government and individuals should take step forward to diminish this issue.
- Some suggest that young people should take a job for a few years between school and university.Discuss what the advantages and disadvantages might be for people who do this. 73
- With the rise in popularity of the internet newspapers will soon become a thing of the past To what extent do you agree or disagree 10
- Some people think that there are things individuals can do to help prevent global climate change Others believe that actions of individuals are wasteful and irrelevant and it is only government and large businesses that can make a difference Discuss both 72
- The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in English who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 200 and 2010. 61
- Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs for example working for a charity improving the neighborhood or teaching sport to younger children To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, in conclusion, first of all, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1983.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43287671233 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97326045372 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479452054795 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 649.8 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.2597870129 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.9375 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8125 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245251268727 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.091595292949 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753861548972 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147085110674 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567063783901 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.