The diagram informs conplete process of applying for credit card and reciving money in it.
Overall,it is clearly seen fron the diagram that applying for credit card is the complex process and it may reject if owner's info is not authentic.
First of all, customer needs to place a online order for the credit card after that credit card will be provided. Secondly, that request will be recived by the credit card company to check owner's identity and funds avaipablity. After that, if the owner's identity is matched and minimum funds are available with them then card will be approved otherwise it will be decline. Thirdly, if card id decline then merchant will recive a notification and he will decline the order and will send message to the customer about decline.
On the other hand, if card is approved, then merchant will full fill customers order. After that merchant will request money to the cresit card company. Lastly, money will be transfered by the company to the customers credit card account.
- The maps below show the town of Langley in 1910 and 1950 67
- The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European countries Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below 67
- The chart below show the percentage of whole world population in four countries from 1950 to 2000 will projection till 2050 67
- The diagram below shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops 11
- In many countries women are allowed to take maternity leave from their jobs during the first months after the birth of their baby Do advantages outweigh disadvantages 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...ard and reciving money in it. Overall,it is clearly seen fron the diagram that a...
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Line 3, column 62, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... seen fron the diagram that applying for credit card is the complex process and i...
^^
Line 5, column 39, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... First of all, customer needs to place a online order for the credit card after ...
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Line 5, column 190, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'owners'' or 'owner's'?
Suggestion: owners'; owner's
...ved by the credit card company to check owners identity and funds avaipablity. After t...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 248, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'owners'' or 'owner's'?
Suggestion: owners'; owner's
...d funds avaipablity. After that, if the owners identity is matched and minimum funds a...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 87, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...erchant will full fill customers order. After that merchant will request money to the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, then, third, thirdly, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 1.00243902439 1097% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 16.0 33.7804878049 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 844.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93567251462 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35690652735 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502923976608 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 256.5 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.5939600111 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7777777778 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5555555556 5.23603664747 202% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.038685621484 0.215688989381 18% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0240498440739 0.103423049105 23% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375127278036 0.0843802449381 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0482973390631 0.15604864568 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431156130913 0.0819641961636 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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