For hundreds of years, people have never stopped debating about how much value should assign to the teachers. Although it seems plausible at first glimpse that teachers are more respected these days since they have more facilities for children's education, I would counter this point of view due to some reasons. I will enlarge on what I mean in this essay.
First and foremost, the cultural condition varies greatly in the hectic world of today and the most important part of that is about being respectful of any specific person such as trainers. To be more exact, nowadays due to huge use of smartphones human's culture are modified in different ways, so the younger generation often turns their back to the old traditions. For instance, my uncle sees himself as a person who always behaves toward his teachers in the best methods and he is always proud of that. In stark contrast, he usually complains that children are not respectful to their teachers in those ways these days since they usually use some words which are inappropriate for appreciation.
The other reason which deserves some words here is that the unprecedented growth of technology in recent decades, lets children access a considerable amount of knowledge which was taught by teachers in the past, so they think of themselves as independent people who do not need to demonstrate any appreciation toward their teachers. Take my cousin, for illustration. As far as I am concerned, I believe that he can look up any information on the internet. Although he is only a ten-year-old child, he sometimes gives us a lecture as well as his father who is a professor in a university. Therefore, he thinks that he does not need to his teachers, so there is no need to be respectful to them.
Another subtle point which I should deem lies on the fact that this era is known as a period which money talks. In other words, the more money you have, the more prestige you will gain and as teachers do not often obtain much money, this career is not considered as a profession which should be valued. Hence, teachers are not more appreciated by society nowadays than they were in the past.
To sum up, given the facts that the world is changing and people often appreciate those who are wealthy these days, I vehemently agree with that statement which means teachers were regarded more significant in the old times than they are nowadays.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, look, so, therefore, well, for instance, i mean, such as, as well as, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1982.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77590361446 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66816090134 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532530120482 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 608.4 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.5450524431 48.9658058833 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.875 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9375 20.6045352989 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0625 5.45110844103 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210063844636 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698788493745 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104621098923 0.0737576698707 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123324023396 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0649982768073 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, look, so, therefore, well, for instance, i mean, such as, as well as, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1982.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 415.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77590361446 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66816090134 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532530120482 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 608.4 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.5450524431 48.9658058833 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.875 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9375 20.6045352989 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0625 5.45110844103 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210063844636 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698788493745 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104621098923 0.0737576698707 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123324023396 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0649982768073 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.