World wide sports occasion s are quite expensive and hosting nation faced plethora of obstacles.To my mind it create alot of boon and bane for the conducting body.This essay will examine the problems and advantages for a nation who conduct international events.
To begin with ,there are multifarious grounds that why country's reluctant to conduct such event,but the cheif among them is lack of improved infrastructure as it is global level events so,they have to available all amenties such as food accomdation,hotels for visiting and many more to facilitate the players and for their prestige which is quite challenging for then.Apart from that,lack of safety and security because there is a huge crowd of masses subsequently,the scale of mishappenings surged such as robberies ,injuries especially terrorist attacks because they are always looking for engagement of large number of folks so they can successfully accomplish their targets .To examplify ,it is surveyed by 'times of India'that recent attacks were made on army premises and crowded places which located nearby the borders .
However,hosting country have alot of merits of organizing international events.As a point,it fortify the economy of country because people from all over the world came in that country which not only aid in the development of their country but also enhance their culture ,tourism and tradition as people know how they are different from them .Moreover,it also paves the way to create opportunity for nation's children and generate courage in them to engage in sports since, drugs are became the prominent issue of today's paradigm as every third person is addicted so it's help them to stay away from drugs and other illegal things .
in conclusion,although ,international events like Olympics are quite 'an arm and a leg 'but it help them in the overall development of country therefore,its advantages overweigh the disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, moreover, so, then, therefore, third, apart from, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1621.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36754966887 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13665934374 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622516556291 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 75.0 20.2975951904 370% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 262.060465351 49.4020404114 530% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 405.25 106.682146367 380% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 75.5 20.7667163134 364% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 29.25 7.06120827912 414% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 45.0 5.01903807615 897% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0966156188371 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659527803336 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0214032086941 0.0667982634062 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0659527803336 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0214032086941 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 41.6 13.0946893788 318% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -13.11 50.2224549098 -26% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 33.7 11.3001002004 298% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.05 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.11 8.58950901804 141% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 32.0 10.1190380762 316% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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